Political Weirdos

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submitted 6 months ago* (last edited 6 months ago) by [email protected] to c/[email protected]

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[–] [email protected] 12 points 6 months ago (2 children)

I get the grammatical construction you’re going for and the point you’re aiming for with that title, but it’s very unwieldy.

[–] [email protected] 8 points 6 months ago* (last edited 6 months ago)

Weirdo with brain the consistency of cheese whiz (and skintone to match) forgets who he tried to kill

My humble suggestion

[–] [email protected] 1 points 6 months ago

It’s a little better with punctuation:

Weirdo whose brain has the consistency of—and face has the color of—Cheez Whiz forgot who he tried to kill.