It is definitely above average. I feel like it would be better without the power lines, but that's a very minor nitpick. There's something just a teensy bit off about the composition -- I don't think Candelestine is right about it being "too close" to the rule of 3rds, but they might be right that there's a better crop and maybe you have to break the rule of 3rds to find it. Still, overall, this is technically sound and a pleasing image. Nice work!
this post was submitted on 26 Jun 2023
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Yes, is cool. I loved what you did with stacking the rectangles in the composition, it almost gives it an illusion of motion despite not being in motion. Main critique is it hews too closely to the rule of 3rds, so feels like a student's photo.