Even in fairly sensible states and for egg freezing, they may want you to jump through hoops.
As part of the process my significant other apparently had to either tell them I didn't exist, or they'd want to talk to me for permission to freeze her eggs. Even if we were married, they're her eggs not mine. It's completely inappropriate to need to talk to me.
The fire in general does. It looks great, but it's the one thing that immediately doesn't look real.
Assuming the non-realism of the fire isn't a stylistic choice, it's at least a defect shared with Hollywood VFX.
Regardless, this is fantastic work OP. Thanks for sharing with us!